INDEXCARDNOVEL: Revisited with CLAUDE — made it better

Wednesday, May 13, 2026

Thou Shalt Not Murder

The fat old white man sat alone in the dim light of his study, feeling the full weight of his years. Some would call what he experienced depression; others might recognize it as the Final Enlightenment—that clarity that comes only after a lifetime of seeking.

He settled into meditation, and the lessons of his years rushed forward unbidden. In his youth, he had studied religion with the fervor of a true believer. Later, science had captured his mind with its elegant proofs and quantifiable truths. Now, in the twilight of his life, he saw how they intertwined.

The insights cascaded through his consciousness:

“The Universe—uni-verse—means one song. We each have a part in the chorus.”

“Heisenberg: The observer affects that which is observed.”

“Everything is created twice: first in the mind, then in the space we call reality.”

“God’s metaphoric faculty of speech, being one and the same as action, is mirrored in man’s ability to affect his surrounding reality for the positive or negative.”

From these fragments, he forged his own principle: Man’s heart connects to his mind and determines the physical reaction.

Philosophers would argue for eons about whether humanity’s collective consciousness discovers reality or creates it. But the fat old white man, in his meditation, had moved beyond argument. He constructed a new understanding: inanimate objects were never truly inanimate. They drew animation from the higher-order mover—the intention, the heart, behind the hand that wielded them.

And in understanding this truth so completely, in grokking it at the deepest level of consciousness, he changed reality itself.

The Universe acknowledged his enlightenment and set a new Law into place.

The Wave

A disturbance radiated outward across the sea of human consciousness.

Most people felt nothing. They went about their days unaware that the fundamental rules governing existence had shifted.

But some knew.

The Dalai Lama paused in his private meditation, his breath catching. He felt the change ripple through him—something vast and ineffable, beyond words. He gathered his acolytes immediately. “The world has changed,” he told them, though he could not explain how or why.

In Trappist monasteries where monks kept their eternal silence, the change registered as a sudden lightness, as if a great burden had been lifted from the world.

In Shinto temples, priests performing their morning rituals felt the kami shift and settled into new patterns.

Jewish rabbis in their seminaries looked up from ancient texts, sensing that a new interpretation had just become necessary.

Amish communities gathering for worship felt it in the very air—a fundamental alteration in how things worked.

In meditation centers, yoga studios, and quiet rooms across the globe, seekers paused and wondered at the sudden sense of rightness that had descended upon the world.

The odd-ball press picked up on it. “Mass Meditation Event,” one headline read. “Millions Report Unexplained Feeling of Change.” But no one could put the sensation into words that made sense.

No one understood what had actually happened.

Not yet.

Three AM

The bar closed at three AM. A drunk stumbled to his car, fumbled with his keys, and turned the ignition.

Nothing happened.

He tried again. And again. The engine refused to turn over. Cursing, he got out and kicked the tire, then slumped against the hood. Eventually, he called a friend for a ride.

The car started perfectly the next morning when he was sober.

The Detonator

She had been promised paradise. Forty virgins. Glory. A place in heaven for herself and her family.

The young woman strapped the vest around her torso in the safehouse, fingers trembling. Her handler recited prayers and reminded her of her duty. She thought of the nightclub, the music, the people dancing in defiance of everything she’d been taught was holy.

She walked through the door. The bass thundered in her chest. Strobe lights flashed. Bodies pressed together on the dance floor.

She closed her eyes and pressed the detonator.

Nothing happened.

She pressed it again. Again. Panic rising, she fumbled with the mechanism, trying to understand what had gone wrong.

Someone bumped into her, smiling apologetically. A security guard glanced her way but saw only a nervous young woman overdressed for a club.

After ten minutes of standing frozen in terror, she stumbled back outside and tore the vest off in an alley, sobbing. She would later turn herself in, unable to explain why the device had failed. The bomb squad would find it perfectly functional when they examined it.

But they weren’t examining it with murder in their hearts.

The Missile

The dotty old dictator inspected his prize: the nuclear missile that would finally fulfill his dream of wiping Israel from the face of the earth. His Chief Scientist provided all the necessary assurances. The weapon was operational. The targeting was precise. Success was guaranteed.

“Launch it,” the dictator commanded. “Now.”

The Chief Scientist gave the order. Technicians initiated the sequence.

Nothing happened.

They tried again. The systems showed green across the board, but the missile simply would not fire.

The dictator, apoplectic with rage, ordered the Chief Scientist’s immediate execution for sabotage.

The firing squad assembled. Seven men raised their rifles, took aim, and pulled their triggers.

Seven weapons jammed simultaneously.

The Stoning

The religious mob dragged the young girl to the rocky field outside the village. She had been raped, but that didn’t matter to them. In their eyes, she had brought dishonor. The law was clear.

They chained her to the stone pillar. The crowd gathered, men picking up rocks with righteous fury.

The first stone was thrown with all the force of zealous hatred.

It fell to the ground three feet from the thrower’s hand.

Confused, he tried again. Same result. The rock simply dropped as if his arm had gone limp.

Others joined in, but no matter how hard they tried, no one could propel a stone toward the girl. They flew from hands with force, then fell straight down as if hitting an invisible wall.

One man, determined to see justice done, lifted a massive stone over his head and carried it to stand directly above her. He would simply drop it on her skull.

He opened his hands.

The stone remained affixed to his palms as if glued there. He shook his arms, pulled, pried. It wouldn’t budge.

Finally, exhausted and frightened, the mob dispersed. The girl remained chained to the pillar, weeping in disbelief, until a sympathetic woman came after dark to free her.

The Dealers

The drug dealer’s phone wouldn’t stop ringing. Angry customers. Panicked customers. Some threatening violence.

“What did you sell me?” “This stuff doesn’t work!” “You trying to cheat me?”

He couldn’t understand it. Same supplier, same product, same everything. But somehow, none of his product was getting anyone high.

Within hours, hospitals across the city were flooded with addicts in withdrawal. The drugs they’d taken had simply… stopped working. Medical supplies—morphine for pain, methadone for treatment—those still functioned. But recreational drugs, drugs taken to harm oneself or escape reality, had lost their potency.

Some desperate addicts got the idea to rob hospital pharmacies. They burst in with weapons drawn, demanding opioids.

The pills they stole were inert in their systems.

The Knife

The fight had started over something trivial—he couldn’t even remember what now. But the rage had built and built, every grievance of their marriage surfacing in a torrent of screaming.

He grabbed the kitchen knife without thinking. The red haze of fury clouded everything.

His wife’s eyes went wide. She tried to run but he was faster.

He drove the blade toward her heart with all his strength.

The point touched her blouse and stopped. Not with the resistance of fabric, but absolute resistance—as if he’d struck a steel plate.

He pushed harder, leaning his full weight into it.

The knife grew hot. Then burning hot. He screamed and dropped it, the flesh of his palm sizzling.

The force of his own push, with nowhere to go, reversed through his arm. The crack was audible. His wrist and forearm broke cleanly, as if he’d punched a granite wall.

He collapsed, cradling his burned, broken arm. His wife stood frozen, untouched, a single small tear in her blouse the only evidence of what had almost happened.

The Pornographer

The pornographer logged into his server’s admin panel, ready for his daily ritual of counting his earnings. He ran a network of subscription sites—nothing illegal, technically, but exploitative in ways he preferred not to think about.

The number that greeted him was zero.

Worse than zero: his credit card processor was showing thousands of chargebacks. Subscribers demanding refunds. Claims of fraud.

Impossible. He clicked through to the sites themselves.

Every image showed as a black square. Every video file refused to play. The content was simply… gone.

He rushed to his backup drives. Terabytes of content stored across multiple redundancies.

All black. All corrupted. All inaccessible.

Heart racing, he clicked on his personal photos folder. The images of his wife were fine. His kids at the beach—perfectly clear. His dog catching a frisbee—pristine.

Only the content created to exploit, to degrade, to reduce human beings to objects—that had been wiped clean.

The Embezzler

Marcus straightened his tie in the car mirror before walking to his office. Today was the day. Six months of careful planning, of moving money in small increments, of setting up the offshore accounts.

Today he would transfer the final sum and disappear. His partners would be left holding the bag. By the time they figured it out, he’d be on a beach somewhere with no extradition treaty.

He slid his key into the office door lock. It turned smoothly.

But the door wouldn’t budge.

He pushed harder. Threw his shoulder against it. The lock had clearly disengaged, but it was as if the door had been welded into its frame.

Frustrated, he returned to his car. He’d go to the bank directly, make the transfers from there.

The car wouldn’t start.

He sat in the driver’s seat for twenty minutes, turning the key over and over, until finally he walked home in his expensive suit, confused and beginning to feel the first whispers of existential dread.

The Gun

The police officer had been struggling with the teenager for thirty seconds—thirty seconds that felt like hours. The kid was high on something, superhumanly strong, and they were both fighting for control of the officer’s service weapon.

The gun fired. The bullet went wide, shattering a car window.

Then the kid twisted it free, the barrel now pointed directly at the officer’s chest.

“Should have just let me go,” the kid snarled, his finger tightening on the trigger.

Click.

Click. Click. Click.

The kid’s face went from triumph to confusion to panic. He turned and ran.

The officer, hand shaking, drew his backup weapon and gave chase. When he tackled the kid two blocks later, the adrenaline had worn off enough for him to realize what had just happened.

The gun had been loaded. He’d checked it himself that morning.

It should have fired.

It should have fired.

The News

“We begin tonight with a developing story that has law enforcement and technology experts completely baffled. What started as isolated reports of vehicle malfunctions has now grown into a nationwide—possibly worldwide—phenomenon that defies explanation.”

The news anchor’s face was grave as footage rolled of cars stranded on highways, of mechanics scratching their heads, of angry motorists demanding answers.

“But it’s not just cars. Reports are coming in of weapons malfunctions, computer systems failing, even simple tools refusing to function—but only for certain people, and only in certain circumstances. The pattern, if there is one, remains unclear.”

A security expert appeared on screen: “We initially suspected some kind of electromagnetic pulse or cyber attack, but the selectivity of the failures doesn’t match any known technology. Some devices work perfectly fine, then fail when specific individuals try to use them.”

“It’s like stuff has a mind of its own,” a bewildered engineer told a reporter.

The Mechanic

Honest Joe’s Auto Repair had never been so busy. The phone rang off the hook. But when Joe arrived at each service call, ready to diagnose the problem, the car would start perfectly.

“I don’t understand,” the customer would say. “It wouldn’t start for me. I tried twenty times.”

“Get in and try again,” Joe would suggest.

The customer would climb into the driver’s seat, turn the key, and… nothing.

Joe would lean in, turn the same key, and the engine would purr to life.

It happened again and again until Joe, a devout man, called his minister.

“Reverend, I need guidance. I’m being called out to help people, but when I arrive, the problem’s already fixed. I’m not doing anything. What should I charge them?”

The minister was quiet for a moment. “What does your conscience say is fair?”

“My hourly rate for the service call. Nothing more, nothing less. And I should probably start telling people I don’t think I can fix their problem—because I’m not the one fixing it.”

“That sounds right, Joe. Follow your conscience. I think that’s what’s being asked of all of us now.”

The Criminals

Within a week, a pattern emerged that governments didn’t want to acknowledge but couldn’t ignore.

Politicians who took bribes found their bank accounts frozen—not by authorities, but by the systems themselves, which simply refused to process their transactions.

Bureaucrats who approved contracts for kickbacks discovered their signatures wouldn’t take on documents. Pens skipped, ink wouldn’t flow, digital signatures failed to authenticate.

Crooked cops found their squad cars wouldn’t start when they were headed to meet dealers or shake down businesses.

Corrupt judges’ gavels felt heavy as lead when they tried to render unjust verdicts.

It wasn’t universal. It wasn’t perfect. But there was an undeniable trend: the tools of harm were refusing to cooperate with harmful intent.

The Understanding

In university physics departments, emergency meetings were called. The laws of physics hadn’t changed—exactly. But they had become… conditional.

“It’s as if intention matters now,” one physicist said, drawing equations on a whiteboard. “The same object, the same force, the same energy—different results based on the mindset of the person applying them.”

“That’s metaphysics, not physics,” a colleague objected.

“Then metaphysics just became physics. Because the data doesn’t lie.”

Religious scholars, meanwhile, found themselves vindicated in ways they’d never expected. The ancient texts that spoke of karma, of reaping what you sow, of the power of intention—they weren’t just moral guidelines anymore.

They were operational manuals for the new reality.

The Departure

The fat old white man died peacefully in his sleep, a slight smile on his lips.

No one mourned him because no one knew him. He had lived quietly, studied deeply, and in the end, through nothing more than perfect understanding, he had changed the world.

His body was found by a neighbor three days later. There was no funeral. His ashes were scattered in a municipal garden by a bored city worker who didn’t know he was spreading the remains of the man who had saved humanity from itself.

Like the great mystics throughout the ages—the enlightened ones who saw clearly and changed reality through the purity of their vision—his name would never be known.

But his legacy would be eternal.

The New World

Peace didn’t reign immediately. Humanity had to learn the new rules, had to understand what had changed.

Murder weapons wouldn’t work. Theft required tools that refused to cooperate with thieves. Vehicles wouldn’t start for drunk drivers. Explosives wouldn’t detonate for those with hate in their hearts.

It wasn’t magic. It wasn’t divine intervention in the classical sense.

It was simply that objects now drew their animation—their willingness to function—from the intention of the wielder. The universe had always been one song, but now the instruments wouldn’t play for those singing out of tune with compassion.

Wars sputtered and died. Armies found their weapons inert when ordered to attack.

Crime plummeted. Police found themselves with less to do as tools of harm simply stopped working for those who wished harm.

Accidents still happened. Disease still existed. Natural disasters still struck.

But the harm humans inflicted on each other—that ancient curse of violence and cruelty—had been hobbled.

Not eliminated. Humans were endlessly creative in their capacity for cruelty.

But checked. Limited. Constrained by a universe that now required good intentions for tools to function.

Some called it EMP for bad guys.

Others called it TEOTWAWKI—The End Of The World As We Know It.

The old world, where intention didn’t matter and a gun fired the same whether held by a murderer or a defender, was gone.

The new world required something harder: that you examine your heart before acting.

Because the universe was watching.

“Thou Can Not Murder”

And it would only help those whose hearts were aligned with the one song.

Peace.

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WRITING: CALUDEAI “improved” my INDEX CARD NOVEL “The Corrupted Record”

Monday, May 11, 2026

Scary but CALUDEAI had my index card story as an artifact IKIDK (I know I don’t know)? Don’t remember “giving” it to CLAUDE but it asked if I wanted to enhance it. I said “Sure WTH”. And, this is what it came back with. Its even scarier about Universal Digital Ids than I could imagine. And, it did it quickly for free. This is really “interesting”!?!

Here is its output.

© 2026 Ferdinand J. Reinke All Rights Reserved

*** begin quote ***

The Corrupted Record

Joe woke to a perfect morning, birds singing their cheerful greetings as sunlight streamed
through his window. Little did he know how this ordinary day would change everything.
Deep within a joint Google-Apple-Microsoft-IBM data center, technicians prepared to
launch humanity’s most ambitious project yet: the Global DNA Database. This culmination
of a decade-long oJshoot of the Human Genome Project had granted IBM’s Watson
unprecedented access to worldwide DNA records. Scientists had posed Watson one
fundamental question: What was the true relationship between genetics, nature, and
nurture? Despite years of debate and conflicting data, no clear answer had emerged.

For a month, Watson processed the problem. Technicians monitored its progress meter—
installed mainly to prevent impatient humans from interrupting the analysis. Finally,
Watson produced a startlingly simple function: IN = f(THGGNA,T)

The scientific community was stunned by the elegant solution. Watson had discovered that
each human being was a time-based function, utterly unique and fundamentally
unpredictable. Even clones weren’t truly identical to their originals due to the temporal
variable. While genetic matches might be close enough for medical purposes like
transplants, each person occupied a singular point in space-time. The implications were
profound: there could only ever be one Beethoven, one Einstein, each bound to their
specific moment in history.

This revelation led to the development of a revolutionary human identification system.
Political leaders, who had long sought unforgeable individual identifiers, quickly backed the
project. As computer specialists began generating the unique tags, it seemed the very
nature of human identity was about to change forever.

But Murphy’s Law proved eternal. During a late-night shift, amid an impromptu game of
pizza-box baseball using wadded tinfoil as balls, a wild throw sent an operator stumbling
into a solid-state drive. By cruel coincidence, it was processing Joe’s record. Poor Joe—of
all the records in all the data centers in all the world, it had to be his.

The First Signs

Joe first noticed something was wrong three weeks later when his credit card was declined
at the grocery store. Not unusual—he’d occasionally forgotten to pay a bill. But when he
checked his bank account on his phone, it showed a balance of exactly zero dollars and a
note: Account holder verification failed. Please contact customer service.

The customer service representative sounded genuinely confused. “Sir, I’m showing your
account here, but… there’s a flag. It says your biometric ID doesn’t match our records.
Have you recently had any medical procedures? Facial surgery? Retinal work?”
Joe hadn’t. He hung up and tried logging into his email. Authentication failed. User not
recognized.
His social media accounts: Identity verification required.
His work portal: Access denied. Employee record not found.
By the end of the day, Joe had ceased to exist in every database that mattered. His driver’s
license still had his photo, but when scanned, it returned an error. His passport was valid
until the border agent ran it through the system. His birth certificate was on file in city
records, but the digital index claimed no such person had ever been born.

The Unraveling

The apartment building’s smart lock stopped recognizing his fingerprint that evening. Joe
had to call the superintendent, who looked at him with suspicion even as he manually
overrode the lock. “System says nobody lives in 4B,” the super muttered. “Says it’s vacant.”

Joe’s employer called the next morning. Not to fire him—they couldn’t fire someone who
didn’t exist in their system. They simply asked him not to return until he “sorted out his
paperwork issues.” His boss sounded apologetic but firm. “Joe, I don’t doubt you’re you, but
according to every database we have, you were never hired. I can’t pay someone with no
employee number, no tax ID, no… anything.”

He tried to open a new bank account. The clerk smiled pleasantly until the verification
process began. Her smile faded. “I’m sorry, sir, but your social security number is showing
as… it says here ‘corrupted data.’ I’ve never seen that before. And your biometric scan isn’t
matching any records in the national database.”

“What does that mean?” Joe asked, feeling panic rising in his chest.

“It means,” she said slowly, choosing her words carefully, “that according to our systems,
you don’t exist.”

The Ghost

Within a month, Joe had become a ghost. He couldn’t work, couldn’t bank, couldn’t sign a
lease or buy a plane ticket. His landlord, sympathetic but worried about legal liability for
housing an “undocumented person,” asked him to leave. Joe paid in cash—his last
withdrawals before the lockout—for a week-to-week room in a boarding house that didn’t
check databases too carefully.

He spent his days in libraries, using public computers to research what had happened.
That’s when he found the others. A support group had formed online—people calling
themselves “The Corrupted.” There were forty-seven of them, scattered across the globe,
all sharing the same impossible story. They’d all vanished from every digital system
simultaneously, all on the same date three weeks after that perfect morning when Joe had
woken to bird song.

One member, a former software engineer named Maya, had a theory. “The Global DNA
Database went live that day. What if some of our records got corrupted during the initial
processing? What if the system propagated the corrupted data to every other database that
syncs with it?”

Another member, Marcus, who’d worked in data security, was less optimistic. “It’s worse
than that. The new biometric ID system was designed to be the master key—the one source
of truth that all other databases would defer to. If you’re corrupted in that system, every
other system treats you as invalid. And here’s the real problem: the system was designed to
be tamper-proof. There’s no appeal process because the designers never imagined it could
be wrong.”

The Choice

Joe sat in his tiny rented room, reading the messages from The Corrupted. Some were
angry. Some were desperate. Some had already given up, living on the margins, working
under the table, existing in the cracks of a society that had no room for people who didn’t
compute.

But Maya had posted something new: “I’ve been digging into the source code—don’t ask
how I got it. The corruption isn’t random. All forty-seven of us had our records processed on
a specific drive, at a specific time. There’s a backup. Pre-corruption. But accessing it would
require someone with inside access to the data center, and it would mean admitting the
infallible system failed.”

Joe stared at his reflection in the darkened window of his room. In the glass, he could see
himself clearly. Same face he’d always had. Same hands, same eyes. But to the world that
mattered—the digital world that controlled jobs and homes and identities—he was no one.
A null value. An error in the system.

His phone buzzed. A message from an unknown number: “Mr. Joseph Chen? This is Dr.
Sarah Kowalski from the Global DNA Database Project. We need to talk about your record.
There’s been… an incident. We’d like to discuss options. Can you come to the facility
tomorrow?”

Joe looked at the message for a long time. After weeks of being ignored, dismissed, and
erased, someone was finally acknowledging the problem. But at what cost? Would they fix
his record, or would they simply make the ghost oJicial?

He thought about the other forty-six members of The Corrupted, scattered around the
world, waiting to see if anyone would fight for them or if they’d simply fade away, statistics
in a failed system that no one wanted to admit had failed.

Joe typed his response: “I’ll be there. But I’m not coming alone.”

Epilogue: The Beethoven Paradox

The irony wasn’t lost on Dr. Kowalski as she prepared to meet with the forty-seven
corrupted records. Watson’s elegant proof had declared that each human was utterly
unique, bound to their singular moment in time. There could be only one Beethoven, only
one of each person who had ever lived.

Yet here were forty-seven people whom the system had rendered un-unique—stripped of
their individuality not by cloning or duplication, but by deletion. They had become nothing,
which was perhaps worse than being copies. At least a copy existed.

As she pulled up the backup files, preparing her presentation on how they could restore the
corrupted records, she realized the deeper truth: the system designed to prove human
uniqueness had revealed instead how fragile identity had become. With one corrupted bit,
one bumped drive during a game of pizza-box baseball, a person could simply cease to be.
And if the system could do it accidentally to forty-seven people, what might someone do
with that power deliberately?

The question kept her awake at night. But first, she had forty-seven ghosts to resurrect.

*** end quote ***

The original story is here: https://reinkefj.wordpress.com/wp-admin/post.php?post=22942&action=edit

Tell me that this is not scary in so many dimensions?

Argh!

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INDEXCARDNOVEL: Another government program goes awry

Saturday, October 21, 2017

“Now see here, Eleven, all you have to do is follow my orders.”

“Yes, sir!” You pompous ass. Of course, I didn’t say that. After all I was only breveted to him for this assignment, then I could get back to counting lab rats, vials of distilled water, or whatever beans they needed counted.

We were signed into the secure facility and escorted to the observation area. I was curious and observant. A lot of red buttons in the observation area and in the observed are. No obvious exits from the observed area and only one entrance / exit from the observation area. Made me wonder who was the lab rat.

“Hi, I’m Kelly. Your narrator for this demonstration”, said a pretty young thing with a big smile. She had the obligatory photo id with lots of colors and letters along the bottom. “This is a demonstration of our new genetically engineered platypus. Its purpose is to infest enemy sewers and explode when needed. Needless to say everything you see here, stays here. Top Secret and all the mumbo jumbo. But then you know all that.” I thought she was very glib. Probably from repetition.

“You’ll see the tank on the other side of me with tubes and connections. For the purposes of this demo, we’re using clear water, but, in the real world, it would be sludge or human waste. Since our platypuses are blind, they are in the designed element. Observe!”

Then in the observed room, something opened and about a dozen “things” shot out and dispersed into the various tubes, tanks, connections. One tank was illuminated in red.

Kelly continued: “The red tank is the bathroom of the target. Let’s say the President of Lower Slobovia. By electronic waves, the brain of the next animal is given the target and released.” Another think opened and out shot a slightly different color animal. “The targeting changes the animals color and everyone he contacts.” Sure enough, every time those creatures bumped into one another, they assumed the new color. 

Almost at random, these things ferreted out the different paths. “We change the maze for every demonstration.” Finally, one reached the red target and popped. All the creatures returned to their original color. 

Then, from the popped creature, a smaller different thing emerged. It was black and had razor teeth as it chewed the carcass. When done, it moved at amazing speed. It attacked every creature it saw making short work of them. Then from the carcass of an early kill, another emerged. 

I could see from the expression on Kelly’s face that this was NOT part of the show. My survival instincts kicked in and I headed for the exit. As I passed thru the door, I looked back. The tank had exploded from all these creatures multiplying. Kelly’s leg was being gnawed and she was hitting one of the many red buttons. She was yelling: “Lock it down.”

Like a guillotine, the door knifed shut as the alarms sounded. I quickly walked out the compound’s exit and back to the car. The guard towers wailed and those gates locked. 

I got into the car and drove away. Never looked back and headed for the airport. I wanted to get back to bean counting where the beans didn’t eat you.

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INDEXCARDNOVEL: Be careful when you take away everything that civilizes a man.

Sunday, November 11, 2007

It was time to strike back. His own personal Fifth of November. He was consumed with grief.

Universal Healthcare they called it. What it was was rationing. And crude rationing at that. Against the old; against the have nots; against those not in power. It evolved into a two tier system. One for the politicians, komisars, and bureaucrats; another for the serfs. He and his wife were serfs.

They had played by the rules working their whole life. They were soulmates. She was diagnosed with a curable cancer, but that’s when rationing killed her. Treatment was expensive and they were old. Paying for it was against the rules. He filed papers, he appealed, he got a lawyer, he bought a politician. He even found the deciding bureaucrat and begged. That to was against the rules. The decider unmasked called the police and Old Serf spent some time in custody. The police beatings were painful. But strangely the other inmates left him alone. Maybe out of pity; more likely for the crazed look in his eyes.

In the end it was to no avail. They were old serfs. No longer useful to the empire. She died and excruciating death. He was with her every step of the way. Now his was alone.

Be careful when you take away everything that civilizes a man.

It was easy. He had met the man that had virtually signed his beloved’s death warrant. So, an example was needed. It would be one small strike at the root. It was oh so easy.

In the library, the government pravdas tracked the decider’s career with the state’s meaningless awards. Most dollars saved by rationing. Most effective “care” region. Biggest growth in organization. New rationing initiatives. What sick joke.

The internet provided the information. Saxon’s poor man series for details. The essays of Jefferson and Paine for inspiration. Directions to the decider’s house.

Gasoline was freely available still; even to serfs.

A printer produce press credentials. He interviewed all the decider’s neighbors as a ersatz local reporter. He knew the decider’s wife and family and schedule. Each workday, the decider would wave goodbye as wife ‘n’ children left for the school. He go back in the house, finish his coffee, and then go to his job killing people. With kindness of course.

So the plan was set.

Be careful when you take away everything that civilizes a man.

The Old Serf had set his affairs in order, given his money to the Old Serfs Charity Fund, prayed to his God for forgiveness, and drove his van to the decider’s house. The decider’s family was just pulling out of the driveway. He gut them off and hit them. He turned and flicked the lighter. Eighty five gallons of gasoline, suitably warmed vaporized, mixed with fertilizer, sprinkled with thermite, exploded. Now TNT would be thousands of times more powerful but it was more than enough. The two vehicles were totally consumed. Siding off melted off the adjacent houses.

He did miscalculate. The decider was knocked down by the blast, received some burns, and was unconscious for his family’s screams. The State press labeled the Old Serf a loon. New laws were passed oppressing the serfs, protecting the privacy of the elite, and propagandizing the masses.

But it was too late. The “spark” from that explosion, helped by the Old Serf’s email to a million of his closest inet “friends”, sowed the seed of rebellion. He was dead, but his beloved wife was avenged. There was the lesson for “deciders”.

Be careful when you take away everything that civilizes a man.

“I know not what course others might take, but for me. Give me Liberty or give me death.”

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INDEXCARDNOVEL: A sad letter from a distant friend

Sunday, October 21, 2007

July 1, 2022

The postman arrived with his weekly delivery, the censor allowed it thru, and we received you letter. It bore the Forty Two dollar embossing on the tissue paper page and we appreciated the sacrifice you made to send it. The youngsters all marveled over it. We don’t get many letters; yours is the first this year. I had to handle it carefully; it was as thin as an angel’s wing or how we have the deli slice baloney these days. When we can afford it. I know I’m getting old when I remember back to fried baloney sandwiches where the baloney was an inch thick. Anyway, my mind wanders; back to the letter.

Oh how I miss my friends; the family finds it hard to believe that we used to take car trips just for fun to visit each other. That is understandable for they have only known rationed gas which varies always cycling higher from the 2200 $/gallon “government approved” price. When you can get it. Price controls always cause shortages. Most people just went along with the changes. But back to answering your letter.

We all gathered in the living room — me, my wife, the boy, his wife, their four children, the girl, her husband, their three children, and our “assigned guest”. In case you don’t have that stuff up there, our governor created a program where one homeless person was assigned to each house. Our guest is a nice man from Detroit, who used to build cars. We had no choice. If you didn’t take the assignment, they trippled your taxes. At that point, most people would lose their house and become homeless themselves and assigned. So they’d take your house, you’d be able to take only one bag, trucked to an assignment center, “assigned” a minimum of two counties away, and probably never see your family again. There was a lot of uproar about that. Most people just went along with the changes. But, back to answering your letter.

We were just interrupted. The Homeland Police & Drug Enforcement just conducted a house to house search. We all had to go stand outside with the rest of the neighborhood for an hour while they checked our identity cards and went through the house with the drug sniffing and people sniffing dogs. The penalties for non-compliance are severe. You lose your house and can even go to jail. Do you have that up there? Most people just went along with the changes. But, back to answering your letter.

We were sad to hear of your troubles. It’s a shame when youngsters die in far away wars. Your boy was a brave fellow. But then some of the choices we make are not really choices. When they brought back the draft, we knew there would be some breakage. Most people just went along with the changes. But, back to answering your letter.

Well, I am out of space on this page. Heaven knows we can afford to let go to a second page. It’s really a shame that there’s no work, little food, and no Lemons, Ice, Bacon, Englishmuffins, Rasberries, Tuna, Yoohoo, or other stuff. We’ll just have to go along with the changes and sing a little “barbara streisand”.

Regards to all,
You long time friend

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INDEXCARDNOVEL: Scrooge’s Scrooge

Saturday, August 4, 2007

He waived goodbye to his son Seth, wife, and their three children.

Seth had finally landed a job as the supervisor of a garbage dump reclamation project. We all knew it was a great job. It paid 800 of the new Kilo dollars per year. But with gas at 200K$ per gallon, he knew he’d never see them again. After all it was more than 300 miles away. It would take 30 gallons of gas or 6M$. And that doesn’t count the permits, taxes, and fees. So he knew he wouldn’t be comforted on his death bed. But he would be mourned at his graveside.

He had had a frank talk about that with Seth.

At his age, he would not be approved by Homeland Security to move with them. And when you “emigrate” more than 50 miles, all your real property is turned over to the town and auctioned. Like abandoned property, it all goes to pay for the welfare of those on the dole.

Seth and he had worked on hiding the “insurance policies” in the things that they are allowed to take. Since Seth didn’t own anything, and there was nothing for the government to steal, the inspectors would be unusually diligent in making sure that nothing left the jurisdiction.

Since they were not permitted to search or seize religious items, each one had a new cross crescent circle moon medallion. Made as the logo of the State religion, it was particularly immune. No one, except he and Seth, knew that they were pure gold. When they arrives at the new house, Seth would put them in some concrete somewhere. With the proper respect to the new “religion” of course.

He had also shaved out the insides of some hockey pucks and glued one “tenth” in each one. He carefully weighed the shave out against the gold coin’s tenth of an ounce. It was tricky work since it had to feel like a hockey puck to the inspector.

He had planned for this day. It’s amazing what you can do when you’re motivated. A doll’s shoes have gold leaf insoles. A hammer has a solid gold head with a steel cover. Gold coins in the car’s radiator. None of his Y2K gold, platinum, and pladdium coins were on the government radar. They were hard to spend because simple possession was illegal. But there was always a “black market”. The government taxed everything. And what they didn’t tax, if they wanted it, they just seized it.

He just couldn’t move with his beloved son because he still had 24 people living with him. It was some family, extended family, friends, and just people who had need a place to stay. His pensions, social security, and hoardings made him into like a cash cow. He always had to watch everything because the grifters, the mob, the cops, or the government were always trying to seize what he had. What happened to all those people when he died? He could do nothing about. Estate tax was 100%!

No one could be trusted. Nothing was sacred.

When he died, his son would NOT come back for the funeral. But he would be allowed to have the body shipped to his new home for burial. And, that’s how they’d move the diamonds. Ebineezer had read about the Jews in Germany and how they did it. Good thing that he was able to talk to those survivors when he was young. Nothing like it was ever mentioned in government school today. But, he knew how to swallow.

Everyone knows nothing like that or this could have happen here in New Amerika.

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